Well, you made it a little better. The colors are fine, you used those properly. However, the font and the detail. The font is enormous, so it should be a little smaller. (The titles are fine, just not the text under the titles). For the detail, you kind of ignored what I said about a paragraph. Your paragraphs are basically like 2 sentences each, which is not nearly enough. At least have like 6 sentences for your paragraphs. Right now, only 20% support...
Conor Walton thats fine if you don't support me even though I wish you would to support me. Bob Sheepert I've edit it isit better now? Mowcar how do you know im rude in game? may i know please ?
Mmmm. Only 22% support. I suggested you have 5 DIFFERENT paragraphs that all have a DIFFERENT reason on why should become a moderator. You wrote one huge jumbled up paragraph that was quite hard to read. Next time, put spaces after your periods, and indent whenever you're starting a new paragraph. As it seems, I have to suggest the same thing over and over again...
^^ The Rest are 88% of non-support I suggest you to write more sentences,be nice to fellow peeps online.
