Okay,

1. Use template
2. Don't bring up donor ranks
3. Add WAYYYYYY more detail
4. Get to know the community (being a new member)

Other than that I won't say anything, other than good luck, and that you should hold back on this app until maybe get active member and such
Good luck

 

You have spammed in chat at least 3 times that i have seen now asking people to look at your mod app. Off that alone i will have to do ~no support~

 

I was asking to reply with ways to edit this application to make it better