So I wanted to make a book. I didn't know how many of you would actually like it so I decided to just realease the beginning. Please tell me if you would keep reading it or not and any tips would be greatly appreciated. :D Chapter 1 It was night. I woke up. The cold rocky hard bed felt like a concrete floor. The wind blew in from the dark eerie cave I sat in. I stepped out. The night felt like day to me. I would sleep at day and wake up at night. I looked up at the starry sky, with its moon in the center glistening it's milky white glow. Fog surrounded it and poured down into the little town that I lived by. I flew down to the town. Gently landing into the rough gravel, my bare feet began to step across the path following it. The town was small. It was old and dated back to the 80's. The rusted wood worked hard to keep the buildings up. The windows in each house were broken severely. A cold air blew south. I turned back. The crops stood in the ground, frozen. There was a crate to the left. The pigs stood still. All frozen. All of a sudden, fog emerged from nowhere and surrounded me. I felt like I was trapped. Stepping back I tripped on a crack in the gravel and I fell into the floor. A black shadow emerged from nowhere and blood began to squirt out of my hands and feet. I cried a high pitched scream. I woke up. It was just a dream. I rose from bed one hand scratching my head and the other busy trying to pinpoint the alarm buzzing it's annoying sound. My feet slipped into the fuzzy slippers sitting down below my bed and I stood up. Downstairs mom was busy cooking breakfast and dad had already left by now. The tv blared loudly the daily news. I creeped down the creaky stairs and walked into the kitchen to get a glass of orange juice. My mom yelled. "Evan, time to eat breakfast!" Ignoring her I walked over to the living room and fell into the couch. A couple of minutes later, she already came out in a full suit. She looked as if she took hours to prepare for it but it only took 5 minutes. "Honey, I'm off to work. Go walk to school in time". Nodding I continued watching the television. She let out a sigh and left the house. I started to eat breakfast and got ready for school. I lifted my backpack and left. The day was like any normal day. I would get made fun of. Get called names, give away my homework. The hours passed as I moved to class to class sharing my homework to multiple kids and just sitting. Daydreaming. I would write often. Stories that I would make up while daydreaming. "Today was the worst day. I lost everything and the hours I spent at school felt like hell. I went back home after school and slept. And I was gone. I woke up in this parallel universe where everything is the same, but the people are different. No one is there except these black shadows. Except one girl. She's very pale and skinny and her clothes are ripped. She stares at me and then hides. I kinda think she likes me.." The bell rang. School was over. The place I live is a small town. All the kids go to one school, and one church. Every house has a small farm and the really rich people have a second floor in their house. Everyone in the town is close with everyone's family except mine. As I was walking I looked down on the floor. I didn't want people to see me. I didn't want to see them. To the side of the road, a kid in a skateboard blew a horn into my ear. Startled, I fell over onto the ground. The kid passed by laughing. I stood back up and saw a girl. She was staring at me while watering the crops by her house. She laughed and hid her face. She looked ridiculously familiar. But I ignored it and continued walking.
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