Oops. Please disregard my previous comment about not explaining why you'll be a good mod. I meant your not really explaining what sets you apart from any other mod who either has those same traits or can do what you do. #VintageFails2K15
What sets me apart from people who apply just cause they a re desperate to be a mod is the fact that I'm not applying because I want to be a mod. I see this server going downhill, and if there is any opportunity to keep this server from dying, I will take it, because I have been playing on this server for a long time, and I don't want it to die.
I doubt the staff already accepted and alot of the other applicants aren't really "desperate", but I see your point there
My point isn't really focused on the word "desperate", rather that I'm pointing out what sets me apart from people who are applying, so that they can be a mod, rather than sincerely wanting to help the server.