★[SG] OppilOPPvp's 2nd Mod Application [Infection & Creative]★

~A bit less color please?
~The font is a bit too big
~Few spelling mistakes
No support for now
Good luck

 

Ok I try edit it

 

I never copy and thx for Feedback :D

 

Done :P

 

Sorry but I have been thinking about adding more details, but I really dont know anymore about me, sorry

 

Support

 

Thanks for your feedback gal. :3

 

Your welcome

 

Bump <3

 

Greetings!

I saw your request in game and am here to offer some feedback on your application for Moderator.

I would first, encourage rereading your application. There are a few sentence/grammar mistakes and one or two word errors such as "responsibility" instead of "responsible". You may consider copying your application into a program such as Microsoft Word to do a spelling and grammar check. I believe if you do this, it should help clean up most of the grammar mistakes.

Aside from that, the base level of content looks good. I would definitely encourage expanding on the various sections, specifically the "Why do you think you should be a moderator?" and "Do you have any past moderator experience?"

In the above two sections, it may be beneficial to cover some traits or life experiences that would help prove to the community that you are ready and able to fulfill this position. Unfortunately the current application process can rely heavily on players who may never have interacted with you, so you need to do your best to convince them with a professional and thoughtful application.

As to the Moderator experiences, perhaps some details on tough situations you found yourself placed in, and the ways you resolved them. Perhaps explain how you have changed over the course of your time as a staff member and any self-improvement you may have made showing maturation over time.

Don't be afraid to use bold,underline, or italics in order to denote separate sections. Sometimes those simple visual queues are more meaningful than a change of color. The green you have chosen for the bulk of your text, I must admit is a tad hard on the eyes. While still readable, it is harder to read than some other color choices..

A snippet from another application, looked something like this.

How old are you?

• <age>

Your in-game name:

• <name>

What timezone are you in?

• <timezone>

Not saying you need to take formatting from another application or anything, each person's should be unique, but sometimes defining those sections easily visually can make a huge difference.

I know it appears that there is a lot here, but I cannot stress enough that the overall content is very good and you have gone far in convincing me you would be a solid Moderator. You have always been very courteous when I see you over on skyblock and your attempts to help reduce some of the spamming in chat is always welcome. I look forward to any updates and best of luck!

Cheers,
Melgrath

 

Wait you said he's mean to u on infection then you said you never see him on infection O_O

 

75/25 percent support.
The thing is, even though your my friend, you are sometimes a little rude to people on infection,
and I have NEVER seen you on creative/skyblock. (granted I don't play them as much but
quite a bit).

 

Support your a nice friendly active player.

 

Ok, I will try to edit it. Thx for feedback

@burrbunn . I never seen you on skyblock and creative too.. And the line you said 'little rude' thx I can changed if you didn't realize

 

1- You can choose whatever server you want to be a mod on its not a 50 50% chance
2- need more detail

 

Support lah Singapore FTW

 

Thx :p

I chose Infection as the Main, skyblock/creative I will try to fit more details in thx for your feedback

 

Bump :P

 

Support Oppil you're a really nice person and I think because you live in a different time zone to most of the americans, you can mod whilst others are offline

 

Thanks @Alphakennybody01 for your feedback

Added 1 more information. Will try to add more