I like this banner, but yeah I agree with above comments. Maybe for the gamemodes, include the main ones 'and more' ;)
I love the art, but I think the banner is a little too big for the banner itself. Maybe try cropping?
I like the idea of a new banner, and I like your enthusiasm however, the text and font is hard to read, Cyp and Crew are Doing holding to much/shouldn't nessacerily be there and there are too many gamemodes pointed out. The banner you have created is also easily made through a program on the Internet as I have made one for another server before.