HeavenlyFire is cool. Heavenylfire is in the pool. HeavenlyFire is a fool. But I have much love for her cause she's a tool. She's a toad. But at least she's not a hoe. Jk, she's like Voldemort but with a nose. She owns tons of horses that go neighhhh. They are all asking for hayyy. Now they all turned gayyy cause there's no more hayy. The love of my life I'ma turn her into my wife. Sike I need to be high if I wanna knot the tie. I guess she's not that bad she calls me her dad(dy). Such a preserver unlike this server cause it's dead. Just like you, cause my album is so brand new. So basically Im in love with a hoe name Heavenly yo. Here's my poem confessing my love to the one and only HEavenylfire cause she's LIT. I'm gonna be the newest sound cloud rapper. Someone make a bedwars server. I miss people :(.
Your word choice is subpar at best, the rhyming scheme is repetitive and monotonous, and most of the poem is irrelevant and idiotic.
