Moderator application

1.I am eleven
2.IGN (in game name) : Creeper_Master55
3.I live in the Central time zone
4.I live in Dallas Texas
5.I speak english and I'm working on speaking french
6.Why i should out of hundreds or more people be a moderator: I never got banned or kicked from this server I play every day and try to help people out since this is my favorite server i want to be a moderator so i could stop spammers and hackers/cheaters I am also a great builder and good with plugins (not so much at building them) Survival and Creative are my favorite's on this server I also own a server right now it sucks but I'm really working on it I also have my own youtube account I've played Minecraft for almost two years now so I could help out if people had a problem plus i am not mean I've been on a server were almost every moderator/admin was mean so please consider adding me as a moderator for this server don't if you add me i understand which i don't even think I'm going to get it so :(
7.I can be on 1-4 hours
8.I have been playing mineverse for about 1 year
9.I do not have any past experience as a moderator like i said I'm eleven nobody wants a eleven year old moderator

Youtube account name: Epic Bonza
Link to youtube account: http://www.youtube.com/channel/UCp3r6PiRPcvS16gZ0Cjpxzw

 

Alright, so, let me give you a review on what I exactly think of your application, since I feel like it.

So, the info you gave in the question deemed most important, being "Why do you think you should be a moderator?", is something pretty basic, not really saying much. You need some more information on this, since, it's basically asking, taking it from the staff's eyes, "Why should we pick you, not the other hundred applicants?". Saying ten sentences isn't much, not showing you're actually ready for the job. You have to be original and standing out. Not much I can say from this, due to the shortness of your application.

A few notes, which are, that you couldn't be playing for two year, Mineverse has been up for only one and a few months, so naturally a mistake, I'd suggest to fix. Another thing, it's not like 'nobody want an eleven year old moderator', I've been a moderator on one of Noobcrew's servers while being merely ten years old. It's not a question of age. Parkour recently turned twelve, he's a moderator. Hell, there has been a nine year old moderator on Crew's servers!

Another thing you might want to consider fixing would be capping "I"s, since that's a part of grammar, and correct grammar on an application shows professionalism, which you are more than welcome to show.

So, what I recommend fixing is:
-Capping "I"s and fixing some of the "a"s as "an"s.
-Adding more detail!
-Fixing the "playing for two years" thing, since that's impossible.

Don't take this the wrong way, just telling you what you can fix, to have a better chance at moderator! Good luck!

 

I agree with salamander9o. It looks very skinny and not detailed at all. Look at others applications that are nice and long. The more detailed, the better chances you have!

 

Ya I guess your right ill try to work on that thanks

 

Mentioning your donator rank is taken as a bribe, and is looked down upon, so just saying. :p

 

No Support Sorry (For Now)

 

Ive changed it now please check it out

 

Tell me if i did something wrong or need to add something

 

Brah I am just saying you need color and more detail and don't say your real name well you can but its your choice to give it out to the world. No support sorry but cookie Said No support sorry and you gave him a dislike that shows how immature you are. I've Seen a lot of good applications and yours isn't long or anything remember think big and things can happen and don't be mad at me for saying this.

 

When you said Ive changed stuff please look. That's kinda advertising but that's not the point its I've*

 

I know ok i really suck at making reports and stuff :(

 

No support, sorry.
By the way, age doesn't matter.
Also, supports don't matter, it's what CypriotMerks thinks of you.