@Aviators I am sorry, but it is rate abuse if the spelling is fine... Also, a 'virtual rating' doesn't make a difference, it's directly against the rules to abuse the rating system. -- 900th Message :D --
She used the wrong "your" it was meant to be "you're" there is no bad grammar rating so that's the closest
I'm a girl for the hundreth time. I am not a "he", I am a "she", how do people not get it?! Absolutely ridiculous. Thank you for pointing out that I have bad grammar. It's a mistake in grammar, not spelling, which should count as rate abuse, either way why does it matter?
Lacks detail, consider looking at accepted applications and using them as a sort of guideline like I did, but do not copy them. Make yours unique, I will keep it Neutral for now as you seem to have potential.