Would really appreciate you checking it out. <3

feel free to critic me, I need to know what to improve on

 

no feedback ;-;

 

nice intro, try talking more

 

Okay, Thanks

 

Thanks for feedback

 

Maybe make the music at 2% it seems like you kept yours at 50% (yes I do YouTube as well) hehe :>

 

Will consider that, Thanks for feedback

 

Good vid, just maybe speak more and louder

 

Nice vid.
LOVE your intro. What song do you use?

 

I love the music and intro, but it sounds like you're not very confident, and your voice is quiet. So just talk more ;)
By the way, what mod is that?

 

ill give the vid 8.1/10 -ign

 

Would love to if you would talk more...

 

Could I join a video of yours? XD

 

Thanks for feedback, I'll talk louder now
I used some hello remix on youtube
The mod is called health indicator, better sprinting, and armorhud

 

Sure why not? Pm me a way I can get in contact with you

 

I meant the intro song.

 

Oh sorry, I don't know the song I just got a random template on Youtube