[USA] iGlitcher's Moderator Application

Neutral for now. Maybe read through the app again as there are some spots that don't seem correct.

 

Grammar?

 

Eg 2nd line missing a "told" or something.

 

It was recently that *players* suggested making new app

 

I can proof the whole thing if you want. (some corrections in bold)

 

There was no need to be so blunt about it

However neutral as I havnt seen you much ingame or the forums

 

Sorry, Good Luck.

 

Usually on Infection ;)

Yes I will improve on that I guess...

 

Could somebody point out all of the grammar mistakes in bold so I can correct them?

 

100% caught the fish of Taz
I support you for this application, Nice detail, very clear, and very good pointed.
Good luck buddy

 

Don't just say that he will be denied that quickly.. That is kind of rude.. @iGlitcher

 

1st 2 paras.

Before I begin this brand new application I would like to thank everyone for all of the support they have given in the past. It was recently suggested by NoobCupCake, SSMH and some others suggested to make a new moderator application since the previous one was outdated, too old, and needed to be closed. So I come to you today with this brand new application. Before I continue, for those who look at me as a childish immature kid please take this apology into consideration. I'm sorry Cypriot, Crew, and the Mineverse Community for my actions on this server and the skyblock server in the past. I truly wish I could take back everything I did, but I can't. So I'm asking if you could forgive me and look at me from a new perspective. Also please don't judge me by my application as I do not have any words of wisdom.

About Me
Hello my name is iGlitcher (Formerly Glitcher726). I'm a 13 year old male currently taking the 8th Grade. I live with a family of four including myself in the United States. My life is full of a lot of fun and many experiences. Not only are my teachers nice to me but they hardly ever give out homework (Besides my Algebra I teacher but I get it done quickly). The reason I'm applying for the position of Moderator is not only for helping and serving the community but because I'm very active.

 

Support, you are in game a lot and also on forums. You're a great guy and really love to help people out.

Best of luck!

 

The spelling and grammar is sketchy, but slightly improved since your last application.
This application as a whole is an improvement. I recall your other applications as repetitive and full of irrelevant info, or just defining traits incorrectly.
To sum up, this is an improvement, definitely, but still not exactly up to par in my eyes.

I don't support this exactly, as it does have its flaws, however it's better than your last one, good on you.

I don't have the time to go into any more detail, sorry.

Good luck.

 

Nuetral, I still think you need to improve on some things like maturity.

 

I used a random grammar site on my phone and corrected a lot of errors.

Thanks!

Thanks for your input! Feels good to know I'm improving!

Thanks for the feedback, as I said above I'm working as hard as possible to be clean of immaturity. Just good to know I'm not perfect. If I was perfect there would be no feedback after all :P

 

@iGlitcher good luck, hope you make the team

 

I have tags disabled currently.

 

I said your name with @

 

Good luck with this application