It's AWESOME... But there's one thing you should have done before. There's a key (I don't know which one, maybe somebody can help here) on your keyboard, which makes your perspective move smoother. This one is needed at the beginning though. But it's really cool.. :D well done
The amount of time you spent in the lobby I felt was too long. I hope for more gamemodes to be shown in the future. Try representing some of the best possible things on each gamemode, for example, the best representation of infection isn't Azteca, because let's face it, it's just camping.
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Heres some suggestions in your 2nd trailer: Use a nice Resource pack and download the Shaders Mod The lobby should be shorter Add a nice introduction, something that grabs the viewers attention, and add a proper conclusion with the Ip, etc Each game mode should be around 3 seconds each, and go to a good spot when you do each one of them Good Luck!
40 seconds in the hub? You should have spent that time in some of the other popular gamemodes, like KitPvP and prison.