✎Edits for "WiKi"

〘Suggested Edits for "WiKi"〙
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I was reading the "WiKi" page on Mineverse's wepage (the WiKi page is the 8th/last tab under the Mineverse logo) and I noticed many errors/mistakes in grammar and spelling. I, being myself, couldn't help but edit and try to fix those mistakes. I am not "hating on" the person that wrote this, but I wanted to be of help, and had some extra time on my hands. I want to be an Editor and major in English and Communications in college, so this is good practice for me, and also improves the Mineverse Website. If there are any changes that you disagree with or would like to add, please feel free to express your feelings in the comments below. Thank you.
P.S. I apologize ahead of time if some of the things are unclear/difficult to read, as these forum tools do now allow me to "highlight" things. I am only able to change colors of the text, and "strike-through" words.

Located directly below this sentence is the KEY for my edits, so that they are understood properly:
█ (with strike-through) = Remove
█ = Insert
←█ = My advice/suggestions

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Here are the following edits that I propose be fixed or inserted into the original text:

• KitPvP
  • Show your inner warrior as you battle others on a map with many intricate courses, designs, and obstacles that may come your way. Don't be cocky though,;←(a semicolon would be more effectively used in this situation than a comma) during your time, you will come across individuals who strive to be the PvP king. Will you be the next one?

• Prison = Fine (No changes)

• Survival
  • Non-←(a hyphen is needed here)arguably the most original gamemode ever to be brought the the←(a second "the" is unneeded) multiplayer realm. Gather resources, form clans to help you survive, exert your power though builds, and battle the undead creatures of the night. Will you reign the survival world?

• Factions
  • Create or join a faction as you battle to be the top dog. Build outstanding bases and safe havens once thought←(this "t" was missing) impossible to make! Battle to protect the things you own, and friends you have by defending or wagon waging←(I think the author mistyped "waging" as "wagon") war with on←(people wage war "on" things, not usually "with" things) other factions. You never want to get too comfortable though, there may be invaders outside your base ready to ruin your progress and take you back down to the bottom.

• Creative
  • Build things you←(I think the sentence flows better with this word) once thought were←(Thanks Diggy, for this suggestion) impossible or ridiculous. Let your creative side take over as you build on your dedicated plot set in place for you to unleash your skill. Show of to others and have fun making your builds into something amazing for you, or the rest of the community to enjoy.

• Infection
  • Run! Hide! The zombie apocalypse will take you into a journey of no return. Will you survive the surge of zombies that try their hardest to exterminate the human population? Survive at all costs←(the "s" was missing from the phrase, "at all costs") and earn rankings as you progress in your zombie survival skills.

• Skyblock
  • Undeniabley←(I believe the author meant this to say: "Undeiably," not "Undeniable") beautiful. Indulge yourself on the journey of the sky people←(Is "sky people a proper noun? If so, please capitalize the S and P in "Sky People"). Work to make your basic floating island into a metropolis in the sky. Use the economy to your advantage and gain wealth by creating custom shops. Battle Compete with←(I think the sentence flows better while using the words, "Compete with," in this situation) others in cash and money to fight to claim the glory of being called the sky lord. Will you be able to grab this opportunity?

• Hellblock
  • The most original gamemode evenr←(I think the author mistyped "ever") brought to Mineverse, Hellblock. Survive in the nether on your skyblock-like island. It is like skyblock, but the total opposite. Play this if you dare. It is challenging, grueling, and something that will make you want to give up. Will this nether version of skyblock get to you, or will you conquer it? (Also, if the author is going to capitalize the first letter in "Hellblock" as a proper noun, why not be consistent and also capitalize the first letter in "Skyblock" as a proper noun?)

• Skygrid = Fine (No changes)

• GTA = Fine (No changes)

• OP PvP
  • Similar to KitPvP but over powered! Use kits and weapons unheard of to in←(I think the sentence flows better with these changes) vanilla Minecraft. Shoot, swing, and shed blood to work your way up on the OP era of this gamemode. You may also want to use new strategies to defeat your enemies who may have armor and weapons that are hard to defeat.

• Parkour
  • Hop from block to block in the parkour world. Upon completing each course, you will be credited with a new prefix to show you have completed that rank. Will you be one←(I think the author mistyped "one") of the few to make it through all of the challenging 24 parkour courses?

• OP Factions
  • Who would have thought?←(I do not understand the point of this fragment. If you disagree, then please disregard this change/edit) Factions but modified to be overpowered and difficult compared to real factions. Build bases and be open to things once thought rare on regular factions. This is the true hardcore factions. Beware of the bloodmoon as well. I wouldn't want to be out at night!

• Skywars
  • Skywars takes the peaceful aspect from the sky gamemodes and crushes it. You will be forced to battle others on small, custom skyblock islands with limited resources you will need to win the game. You are also open able←(I think the sentence flows better with these changes) to use your cash to buy things that may help you succeed. Will you be one to rule the sky and someone who will gain respect from many?

• Archer PvP = Fine (No changes)

• OP Prison
  • Prison, but then again OP. You will be set into mines labeled A-Z as you work your way up to the final rank. Use OP picks and mine in areas with a collection of resources which←(I think the sentence flows better with this word added) you can sell for the money you need to progress.

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That is all! Thank you for taking the time to read through my edits. Again, if you disagree with, or want to add more changes, please comment below.

Thanks.
NectarBee

 

Good job, Bananaman.
GREAT JOB.

 

Impressive Nectar!

I'll inform Nana of these errors
@bananaman11223

Also for Creative, shouldn't it be "things you once thought WERE impossible....." And not was?

 

Don't judge me. I have always been a victim to petty mistakes. I should've proof read this multiple times. Guess we missed some things. :mad:

Thanks, I'll get these added soon.

 

Diggy,
Thanks for your input.
I added the changes that you suggested.

 

Oh snap, look at the purple edit. ;)

 

Lmao

 

Bananaman11223,
Thanks for accepting my edits.
I did not mean to come across rude or anything like that. I just enjoy this kind of thing (idk I guess editing is a passion of mine). I was just trying to be helpful and use up some free time.

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that was probably a mistake. I might have made the whole thing purple accidentally while trying to find the original bluish-blackish color that is default. :eek: LOL.

 

Haha. I started to freak out when this was published because I remembered the mistakes weren't fixed. I knew of some. Anyways, thanks and hopefully these can be added ASAP.

 

I don't know why but this literally made me die of laughter....

 

Lel.

 

Hallelujah.

 

@bananaman11223 im not best at spelling either

 

I know how to spell, won several spelling bees in the past. Not knowing how to spell thought would be sad at my age. They are petty mistakes. ;)

Cypriot was alerted, should be fixed soon with gamemode colors.

 

Great suggestions. Hopefully Cypriot will add these.

 

Nice find

 

Fixed. Thanks.