Hello all! I have been building a Skywars sort of spawn for the community and I just wanted to get some feedback on whither it is good or bad. Any sort of comments and the support/no support feedback is greatly appreciated. I also fully accept suggestions to the build. This is subject to change. Enjoy! The theme is sort of an enclosed paradise. It includes a water fall and much much more. It is a jolly sort of spawn. One that is supposed to feel open and beautiful. Let me know if something is out of place. Footage: Once again, suggest away! I also have been debating whither I should add a Skywars word in the sky like the curent one. Let me know what you think. We could always put an HD display which looks cleaner. See you in-game some time - Nana PS: This build is accessible by doing /p h bananaman11223 on MV creative. Just for the curious ones out there. It is near the top of the plot. :rolleyes:
Update #1: http://imgur.com/Txos6ow New islands to add to the majestic scenery. One is birch while the other is oak. Both of them have different features. The redstone at spawn has been removed to prevent any confusion. Keep the suggestions coming!
This is pretty dam cool. Post some screenshots without the texture pack though so we can see the reality of it. Support Nevertheless, as the current spawn somehow dulls the mood with its over bright design.
If you don't mind, I wil make a few comments on the structures. Jk if u Mind I'm still making them <3 1.) The arch and the islands coinciding with each other doesn't work. They don't both go. You will either have to remove the arch or the islands in my opinion to make it work. 2.) The arch isn't very well constructed (It doesn't quite fit with the surroundings). By this I mean that the arch that covers the portal and a lot of the ground, doesn't quit look up to scratch with the skill of the outer build. Just a few minutes of playing around with new designs or even removing this and implanting something new here would make the design a whole lot better. 3.) The wooden ground colours and shape shouldn't be like this. The wooden floor should somehow blend into the foreground. And the shape should round off into the hills. I don't really know how this can be done effectively but I have seen it done and if you need help I can play around with some designs :p Sorry for what seems like some major criticism but it won't take long to edit and being truthful is always the best lol.
The arch is made out of stone brick which matches the stone on the mountain side. The white glass also matches stone. We made some changes to the arch and have added some new details. Although, the islands will stay there. I see no point in moving them. About the floor, it matches with the greenery in the surroundings. This includes trees, and bushes. I will look at more designs but probably won't change that. I have had a couple MV builders look and suggest things. Thank you for your feedback. It has helped the build go one step further.
Ok, I have seen you have taken my feedback, and others, well. I Support the build as becoming a new spawn despite this factor but... I Still don't agree with the way the outer edge looks medival and shrubbed over contradicts the modernistic taste of the archway flaunting the middle. Thanks for taking the feedback well, but if you like it this way, that's fine by me, others seem to like it! ;)
