[USA] Restinq's Moderator Application (Factions & OP PvP)

Howdy,
Restinq.

Today I will be reviewing your application using 7 main categories that will be bolded and listed below. They will include ways you can improve and ultimately make your application better. You will also be graded according to the quality of each category on the application. This can range anywhere from 1-10.

• Ideas
  • You have a few good ideas although you could add a bit more information on your application. By doing so, you will congregate new, original ideas that may benefit you in the future.
    • Rating: 6/10
• Sentence Fluency
  • Your sentences mostly go a long nicely and read well upon viewing. Though, I suggest you revise your application a bit to improve the few sentences that don't sound ideal. Nothing can ever be perfect. Play around with some new ideas and see what you can come up with.
    • Rating: 7/10
• Organization
  • The organization you have currently seems to be good but not perfect. I suggest you use bullets, space your application more, and use the options the forum gives you to make your thread look even better.
    • Rating: 7/10
• Voice
  • The overall voice of your application seems powerful and intriguing to the reader. Nice job with this part. The voice of this application is one of the strong suits that is going to benefit you.
    • Rating: 9/10
• Word Choice
  • Your word choice is not the greatest but it is not poor either. I suggest looking through a thesaurus to find meaningful words that will make your application look smarter. Word choice is key. Searching for some new ones couldn't hurt.
    • Rating: 6/10
• Conventions
  • There are some grammatical errors, spelling issues, and other problems hidden in your application. I suggest you go through yourself and read it over and over again to find the areas in which these issues are located. If you fixed this, the application would flow better and the overall voice would improve.
    • Rating: 5/10
• Presentation
  • The positive attitude and willingness to help the Mineverse community makes your application look like something the admins should look into.
    • Rating: 8/10

The total range of your scores is about 68%. Improving, revising, and following some of the tips I gave you may help to greatly improve this application. I hope you found this helpful. Good luck!

Regards,
Nana.

 

Support.
Reasons:
You are nice in-game
You know the rules

Things to Improve on:
Information amount in Application.

 

Thanks bananaman for the help, I am currently still improving my application. Thanks for being nice about it too.

 

Sorry no support. It's always the same thing over and over for everyone. Think about different Ideas, people.

Plus you need to be more active, Sorry.

 

Become more active, add more info on why you think you should become moderator.
Neutral good luck!

 

No support, I'd like to see you a bit more active on forum before I change my mind.

 

Thanks for the input, but I'm on everyday. :P

 

bananaman, how many moderators are on Factions? Just wanted to know, thanks

 

AgentWifi is the only faction moderator.

 

Oh really? I never really see him on the server though.

 

That's why I'm applying for Factions, I think it would be a great idea if there are more helpers

 

I think you'll be a great faction moderator someday. You'll do great

 

Thanks

 

When do people get mod? I want Restinq to be a mod, he is really chill IGN and is active.

 

Depends. No one really knows when the next promotion will take place. I'd day a few weeks from now. It usually happens every 1-2 months.

 

ah, I see. I was curious when the next people gets promoted. I too, wish to become a mod too. I'm a very active person and also helpful in forums :3

 

support.

 

Thank you! You won't be disappointed

 

I'm on everyday, plus if there is a reason I'm not active, it's because school has started. Thanks for input.