Some of my reasons are stated above such as why you wrote your application (stated in your introduction) and due to grammatical errors. However, you liked my post even though I no supported you which shows me that you can take criticism and want to fix things which I think is really great. Changing my no support to neutral.
No support for right now. If you want my neutral edit your grammatical errors. You were a good applicant until you went on this immature streak. Good luck :D.