kit pvp & op pvp mod ap

How old are you? i am 15
Your in-game name shores68
What timezone are you in? southern
What country do you live in? australia
What languages do you speak? i speak English
Why do you think you should become a mod? i can help people out and im active
How long can you be active on the server everyday?1 and a half hour
How long have you been playing Mineverse? around 2 years
Have you ever been banned in the past? no
Do you have any past experience as a moderator? yes
Which two servers would you like to moderate? OP PVP & KIT PVP

 

thanks to the moderator that posted a comment on my other post it helped me out so a big shout out to you and i hope u guys will think its much better than the one that had bad spelling so thanks!!!

 

No support jonathan,

*Lacking rigor
*Still grammatical/spelling errors
*Your application is in need of detail

Hopefully this helped you jonathan, good luck .

 

i think i did good but its good u did not say what other people said to me on the other ap i posted

 

Jonathan I have no intentions on being rude to players. I only want to give them my whole-hearted help. Do not let anyone bring you down because truly you are just as qualified as me to get promoted to moderator. Good luck my friend .

 

No Support.

Suggestions:
Add more detail
Too much color in my opinion
Fix your grammatical errors (there are many)

If you say you are 15-years-old, you should be able to provide much more information and not have this many grammatical mistakes. Your profile page also says you are 35... you may want to change that.

Good luck!

 

No Support.

 

No Support. Add tons of more information. Good luck.

 

No support, reasons above ^^