Can you please tell me what to improve on, also if its spelling or punctuation then tell me where my mistakes were.
Ok, maybe you can add a bit more information on the character that you have. Such as add a section of Helpfulness, Trustworthy, Respectful, and stuff like that. Thanks Argentinaboy95
Was only one spelling/grammar mistake but as you asked for it, ''So much grammar mistakes'' meant to be ''So many grammar mistakes''. Sorry if it was a bit harsh lol, Ill remove it.