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  • Mineverse Council: Season 1

    Discussion in 'Off-Topic' started by Alixilyn, Aug 23, 2014.

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    1. Alixilyn
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      Alixilyn Experienced Member

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      Hey guys!
      Check out the prologue before reading chapter 1!
      http://www.mineverse.com/threads/mineverse-council.21201/

      Chapter 1

      Airship Departure
      'Hurry up, Ali!' yelled Noah.

      The city of Steampunk, Scolio.

      Alixilyn hurries out onto a enormus dock and sees the city surrounding her. Facinating bridges, fantastic buildings and the symbols representing her fair city, airships. Airships came in different shapes and sizes. They were the reason how Scolio were able to stand tall against a dangerous threat. Alixilyn started to walk foward to find Noah in his airship, the Rosanna Ryders. A large airship with the platform of strong, sturdy planks and the ballon itself, pure crimson red decorated with small parts of white. Weapons arched along the edges. The engineering was well done and ready to fly.
      Noah was the captain for this ship, a male steampunk airship captain.
      He wore a crimson red coat lined with gold and black top, pants and brown leathery shoes with buckles. He pulled white gloves from his leathery belt and pulled them on. Most importantly, his shiny, golden goggles.
      Alixilyn was a female steampunk citizen.
      Wearing a brown dress of other shades of brown and white frilly parts along her top. She too, wore leathery boots but longer, along with long, white gloves. She wore leather goggles instead of gold.
      Aboarding the Rosanna Ryders, along came Glaadiator.
      Glaadiator was a female airship head-captain, owning the Grand Glyder.
      She wore similar to Noah, but instead a more feminine style.
      'Are you sure you can go alone?' she said strictly. 'It always seem the best to travel with another airship,'
      Noah nodded.
      'Very well,' Glaadiator backed off. 'I wish you luck,'
      While Noah went to fetch a friend which is also an engineer, Glaadiator turned to Alixilyn to see that she was looking at a figure from far away. It exited the Council's Castle. A large, bronze palace located in the center of the city.
      'Its Cypriot,' Glaadiator whispered.
      'What?'
      'He wanted to be part of the council. I wonder if his judgement is complete,'
      'Why?' Alixilyn questioned.
      'The same reason everyone else has, to gain power,'
      '...'
      Noah approached from further away to see him with a friend, Sean. (A.k.a splitsucks)
      Sean was a male steampunk engineer.
      Wearing leathery clothes, shoes, gloves and of course goggles.
      Glaadiator wished luck again once ready to set off, and backed away.
      The airship lifted from its pier platform from the dock.
      While the airship departed, Glaadiator watched Cypriot. Feeling unconfident, she sent 1 small airship to watch over the Rosannna Ryders and report to her everyday. She wouldn't let them go alone after what has happened.


      Cypriot grinned. Horror ran through Glaadiator's veins.

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      @NoahGuyRyders
      @Alixilyn
      @Glaadiator
      @CypriotMerks
      @SeanTheSun

      HEY GUYS!
      I am going to make a server of this story! But I will obviously NOT advertise. If you wish to know the ip for this story, pm me! If this is not right to do, then please inform me instead of reporting me. Thank you.

      Also, no picture today, sorry. :(

      I might do a comic of this season once I finished this season by story. Also, I will do an art based on this story!

      Thank you!
      [Chapter 1 finished]

      Chapter 2

      Commands of the Council
      Inside the council room, the man with the missing eye stood up straight.

      'You all know what we discussed about,' he muttered.
      Everyone nodded.
      He pointed at the chair at the far end, or at least the player sitting on it.
      'I want you to return to Factions,' he bellowed.
      The mysterious player stood up and disappeared.
      He pointed to the next player, next to the previous player he pointed at.
      'I want you to return to Survival,'
      The same thing happened. The player stood up and disappeared.
      He then pointed to the chair left of him.
      'You know where to return to,' he nodded towards the player.
      The same thing happened.
      The last player knew what to do, he stood up but the man with a missing eye stopped him.
      'Do not leave yet,'
      '...'
      'Remember to meet me at the Dragon,'
      The player nodded towards him then disappeared.
      The man walked down the stairway then turned to his left to the tallest tower.


      Later on the day,
      The mysterious player appeared inside the Dragon's mouth to find a man with a hunchback and a loose, baggy cloak on.
      'Follow me, master was been waiting,' he squeaked.
      Inside the dragon, he saw the man with a missing eye, wearing a cloak. He could easily tell it was him due to his heavy breathing.
      However, next the man was another player.
      This player was much more stronger looking and more bulky than the man with a missing eye. He even had a much more deeper voice.
      'You have failed the council. You will be replaced with Cypriot, understand?'
      This player went silent.
      'You are too soft on the players. We need someone strict and that can understand order and power,'
      'I never enjoyed being in the council anyways,' the player replied.
      'You have a week left of being part of the council. You dare ever say anything about this, we will eliminate you,' the voice sounded menacing.
      'You can't keep me quiet forever,' the player replied.
      'The ways of you killing and torturing others won't go unpunished,' he continued.
      The strange man started laughing menacingly.
      'Your a fool to join the council in the first place, weren't you?'
      'I thought the council was to do good, not evil!'
      'This isn't evil! It is power. Now leave before I dispose you myself. You also have no meaning to wear that cloak anymore,'
      '...'
      'We all knew this entire time why you stayed in,'
      He tore the cloak off to find the face of the determined player.
      'I should have known it was you,' the strange man said.

      Grayson stared at the strange man intensely.

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      @Grayson , the only person mentioned in this chapter xD
      Other than @CypriotMerks <:

      Please don't take this seriously Cypriot and Noobcrew! It is only a story...

      Here is today's artwork!
      This is kind of a W.I.P (Work In Progress)
      [​IMG]
       
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      Ichidna Experienced Member

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      Is it a modded server or a bukkit server?
      Nice story though.It would be cooler if you include me in :t:
       
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      So far it is vanilla, but I might upgrade to bukkit.
       
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      This is so good! I love the steampunk theme ;)
       
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      I love this so much omg ;-; Keep it up!!!
      Do you think it'd be possible for me to draw the main characters (Or at least you, Glaad and Noah?)
       
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      Alixilyn Experienced Member

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      I forgot to ask for the server if you wanted to join! What server? <:
       
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      Chapter 2 has been added!
       
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      ;D
       
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      This has the makings of something great! Get back to work! Write until your fingers BLEED! I need MOAR!!!!
       
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      D:

      yes master! don't hurt me! D:
       
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